Stating the obvious is not interesting.

“He responded by tsking before he caught both wrists in one hand. His free hand …”

“Tugging her purse strap up on her arm, she headed for thedoor. “You have my cel…”

“She’d wanted Randall Parks from the moment her hormones kicked in. Her best fri…”

“Don’t you ‘baby’ me, you backwoods barbarian. I'm not settling for bringing you…”