Do not dictate to your author; try to become him. Be his fellow-worker and accomplice.

“She was writing for everybody, for nobody, for our age, for her own...”

“A fine gentleman like that, they said, had no need of books. Let him leave book…”

“Her pleasant brown eyes resembled Ralph's, save in expression, for whereas he s…”

“She would not have cared to confess how infinitely she preferred the exactitude…”