Every first draft is perfect, because all a first draft has to do is exist.

“In her minds eye she sat there, in the domesticated golden sunlight on the velv…”

“War is inevitable when the world is fallen. If you stop one, another will start…”

“I was depressed, but that was a side issue. This was more like closing up shop,…”

“The body, the mind, and the spirit don't form a pyramid, they form a circle. Ea…”