No, it’s not a very good story - its author was too busy listening to other voices to listen as closely as he should have to the one coming from inside.

“If it's ka it'll come like a wind, and your plans will stand before it no more …”

“The first thing was to get down to Addie Richardson's henhouse, and that was a …”

“By the time he was done with the deer it had been dark three hours and his bad …”

“She did not know if her gift came from the lord of light or of darkness, and no…”